MALDIVES corrected by maria

Maldivas (!!!!!)

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Names of the students in this group? 

Maldives a paradise within your reach (catchy title :)!)

23 de septiembre del 2021 > ENGLISH!!

Where is the introductory paragraph summarising most of the info (and providing a picture of) the place + a catchy questions persuading the reader?  

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Angaga Island resort and spa

This beautiful and immense group of islands is made up of more than a thousand small islands, located in southern India. Its tropical and humid climate, its beautiful white sand beaches, its calm and crystalline waters and it's (this shall be a pronoun, like the other 'its') almost virgin natural landscapes, make this group of wonderful islands a full-fledged (weird collocation) tropical paradise, a true paradise (repeated), above all, for those who love the sea, beaches and water sports

MAAFUSHI: Maafushi is the jewel in the crown (comma missing?) of all the local islands of the Maldives, the pioneer (in what? a bit unclear) and the most committed to local tourism in the country. Maafushi is ahead of all its neighbours, but it's also where you’ll find the most tourism. 

This destination is characterised by its crystal clear waters and incredible views that make this place a paradise. > this is more general info that shall be moved before the Maafushi paragraph.

https://youtu.be/Dgl2xeT

Built-attractions (!!) + add a catchy subtitle persuading the reader, not only describing

GULHA: fried fish, coconut, onion and spice dumplings garnished with lime and chili.

BAJYA: fish, coconut and onion samosita.

KULHI BORKINAA: spiced fish cakes.

THELULI KAVANUU: spicy fried fish croquettes.

Please do not simply use a list of food but write actual full sentences connecting them

From simple sea views to the experience of diving or fishing in the moonlight. Not forgetting the gastronomy (REPETITIVE IDEA > you have already talked about gastronomy, this is somehow disorganised) and strolling through its cities.

Where can I stay > question mark? + catchy subtitle

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Le Bora Bora by Pearl Resorts: Whole bungalow - 1 bedroom - 1bathroom - 79m². 

2 beds(1 extra large double, 1 sofa bed)

Breakfast included

1 night, 2 adults - 1.042€

The Maldives offers a wide range of hotels and hostels of all types and price ranges. These include sleeping in luxury cottages by the sea.> IT IS NOT OK TO HAVE A LIST OF ONE SINGLE DESTINATION AND THEN, LATER ON, AN EXPLANATION OF THE TYPES OF ACCOMMODATION THAT THE ISLANDS OFFER.

IT READS UNFINISHED. YOU DO NEED A CLOSING SENTENCE IN HERE