The inequalled Santorini - CORRECTED by Maria

 

by Elisa Elena & Martina Dalmau

 

 


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'Selling dreams' activity

In groups of three, choose a tourist destination you would like to present as a tour operator, and provide an entry for a brochure. It shall include: A nice picture! 1) Catchy title (with the name of the destination) 2) a paragraph with the most important aspects/points to mention about the destination (a question) 3) Brief description (with POSITIVISING adjectives) 4) Natural features (weather) 5) Built-attractions 6) types of accommodation >> with Attractive HEADINGS >> By personalising it (“you”)
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Galápagos-CORRECTED BY MARIA

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Feedback maria: INFO missing Problems with content Problems with grammar, vocabulary spelling/orthography     The a phro disiac Galapagos Islands (> nice/catchy title!)   (   Provide a title for this picture + the name of the place it illustrates The island is located in the Pacific Ocean and [add a subject] belongs to the country of Ecuador.   [definite determiner is missing] Island of Galapagos is  more known  for  very people (>These are basic grammar problems).   WHERE IS THE CATCHY QUESTION? (example. will you miss it?) On the island there was one of the biggest turtles in the world, but now it is extinct (not relevant to sell the destination, right?) . Can you see very types of (BASIC GRAMMAR THAT WILL NOT PASS) animals like the sea lions, penguins, etc. The weather is perfect to spend the night on the beach, it is very tropical. It is a very pretty place to visit. (linking idea between these sentence...
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CANCUN-CORRECTED with coloured comments by maria

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  Feedback maria: INFO missing Problems with content Problems with grammar, vocabulary spelling/orthography   this is the best advert I have seen so far! congrats! very carefully worked-on and planned. great!   CANCUN The authentic paradise for the youth Gorgeous beaches, rich gastronomy and exotic parties. Are you going to miss it? Cancun is one of the most visited countries in the world.  It has everything: ancient monuments, tasty food, luxurious hotels, white sand beaches, etc. What's more, entertainment is guaranteed day and night.   TROPICAL CLIMATE We recommend travelling between December and March to enjoy to the maximum your trip to Cancun. The weather is usually hot but with refreshing breezes that create an ideal climate . It can rain strongly in some seasons but don't worry about it. The rains are very short, therefore, your perfect beach day won’t be spoiled. Delfines Beach COMFORTABLE ACCOMMODATION Cancun has the perfect accommo...
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